Here in my first body paragraph, I added a sentence that better introduced my claim that went along with the narrative that supported it.
Here in my first to second body paragraphs, I added a transition sentence that leads into my next claim. Then in the beginning of my second body paragraph, I added a sentence that again introduces my next claim and the narrative that supports it.
Here in my second to third body paragraphs, I did the same thing as before where I added a transition sentence that connects my two paragraphs. Then I added another sentence that introduces my last claim with the last narrative I used.
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