The main question or problem my writing seeks to address is I guess, whether being a veterinarian is actually a Discourse (saying/writing – doing – being – valuing – believing).
The idea or point I feel I’ve made successfully is that being a veterinarian is a Discourse, more specifically a Dominant Discourse. Also, that being a veterinarian goes along with Gee’s “saying (writing) – doing – being – valuing – believing.”
The idea or point I feel I need help with is maybe clarifying or expanding on the ideas I have already presented in my paper. Maybe ideas aren’t clear enough and need more explanation?
My number one concern about my paper is whether or not all of my ideas – paragraphs tie together nicely and create a smooth flowing paper for my readers.
I definitely need help from my peers on creating a title for my paper, and forming a conclusion so that everything gets connected back to my main claim, and summarizes everything I have talked about.
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