When reading “habits of the creative mind” Pages 208-219, I discovered a few things that I can do to improve my paper. I want to make a stronger challenge to the scholarly conversation as is applies to Gee’s “An Introduction to Discourse Analysis”.In this document she does not mention the possibility of a non-dominant Discourse becoming a dominant discourse. But for most hockey players that’s their dream, this transition from playing a little kids game 2 still playing little kids game for millions of dollars, and the recognition that comes with being a pro hockey player. There’s even artifacts that show this transition. often junior hockey players will say make it to “the show” which means making it to the NHL. I feel as if I center my ideas around this challenge to gee, it will make my paper stronger and more interesting. After reading the letting go section of Habits of the creative mind, I was able to look over my project and found certain information that just confused my reader. I have removed such passages. Getting feedback is important to establish the main question or problem your breeding seeks to address, It allows you to see if you have been successful at educating somebody in the Discourse.
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