As far as my artifacts go I think I could definitely use one more to make my 3rd. This artifact will hopefully clear up and confusions my reader has about my Discourse. I also feel as though I can still better integrate my artifacts with With gee’s ideas about About discourse. I may that you Develop a paragraph to develop the idea of Discourse and of Discourse analysis after my into to synthesize the Discourse of Hockey and Gee’s Idea’s. I want to more clearly represent the idea that hockey is a hybrid Discourse because Player’s try to reach their highest potential to go from a non-dominant Discourse to a dominant Discourse. I also am going to develop a strong conclusion once i’m done adding my last artifact and incorporating in into the Discourse of hockey and Gee’s idea’s. My peer review group was able to help me locate the points in my essay where I need to further elaborate on certain terms that are in the discourse. Ex what is a healthy scratch?
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