- My artifacts worked well for my project and where I see my project going. I plan to continue to use my same artifacts and possibly looking for a another artifact to support my argument. I need to go back through my paper and add Gee’s work to the artifacts to strengthen my stance of the Chosen Discourse.
- I believe I’m using good language in regards to the artifacts. I do think I could clear up some confusion throughout my paper by using more of Gee’s work to support my claims made with my artifacts. The kinds of language I feel are lacking are the scholarly work by Gee’s building tasks. With the building task work in my paper I believe it will become much more insightful about my chosen discourse.
- I need to work on adding a paragraph about Discourse and Discourse analysis. My introduction currently is about my topic and how it relates to what I’m trying to argue which is that world politics, culture, and social aspects of life are reflected in world soccer. I believe if I open up with Discourse work and using that to transition to my topic my paper will be much more effective in analyzing the Discourse I chose and getting the most out of my sources.
- The issue I currently have that I addressed in my Note to Peers and was brought up in the discussion is adding Gee’s work to my project.
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