My main question is “have I showed the discourse that people gain when playing hockey.” I used a few examples from the artifacts to show what hockey players are familiar with than other athletes may not understand.
I believe I have made it clear that when playing hockey, you pick up a certain discourse, that only players can understand. I used good examples that show hockey is different than other sports.
I think I need help relating my artifacts to each other. This way I will be able to use a combination that will make the reader understand my point more clearly.
My number one concern about my paper is that I am not using the citations and artifacts correctly. I also want to make sure my paper is very organized.
“collreadwrit2e”
30 min